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XD Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Um more?

So... not a fan of twilight at all, but this was very very good, Betsy! I *want* to read more about her! I loved the scene with Charlie especially.

It made sense to me that Charlie would understand her need for something normal. XD Like said, I hate Twilight too, but Renesmee - she practically begged for character meta fic.

wow--that is beautiful. Really beautiful. You said volumes in just a small collection of lines. Lovely.

Aw, thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

XD Thanks!

(also, ROFL at your icon. XANDER HEEE!)

Woah, this was awesome! I would never have expected awesome Renesmee fic, but, uh, this was.

Have you thought about writing more? Does she make friends?

ALSO THANK YOU FOR BREAKING UP THE IMPRINTING THING. I never got to that point in the books but the concept makes me uncomfortable.

Renesmee deserves so much more love than she gets! Mostly because, WOAH, potential for craziness weee! The only character in the entire series you can believably write completely any way you want (she even expresses a preference for human blood in the books!).

I'm pretty certain there's more to her story - traveling and seeing the world, probably the Volturi, learning everywhere she can, going her own way, dating humans, killing people. "You were wrong," she writes her father. "It doesn't make you as bad as the murderers, to kill them. You were wrong." I'm hoping I'll write some more sometime, because writing this one was a lot of fun.

I KNOW I KNOW OMG THE IMPRINTING. It was so ridiculous! I was like 'HA YEAH RIGHT SHE'S FALLING IN LOVE WITH HIM.' XD

THIS IS AWESOME

I am SO WITH YOU on needing to change up the Twilight universe. And this is great! even in how messed up she is she is sort of the most normal? What you would totally expect from this sort of situation - a rebellious contrary girl who wants to run away from her family that seems so immobile, and part of this rebellion would totally include her not just ignoring her vampireness.

FISHING :DDDDD I LOVE that she hangs out with Charlie! Aawwwwww charlie is great, he needs some love. And of course she changes her crazy name, and go her for leaving even Jacob because seriously, "that kind of devotion is hard to resist" my ass. dude, rock on!

YAY THANK YOU!

I KNOW I KNOW how messed up is the Twilight universe? And she's got the money, she can take care of herself (parts I didn't write: the day Renesmee Cullen transferred 5 million from her account to Mary Blake's and never touched her account again). And at the same time, she's so clueless about stuff! (other parts I didn't write: the first time a guy hit on her. BOY HOWDY, was that interesting. also, the time Jacob came to visit her in Harvard and she KICKED HIS FURRY ASS back to Washington.)

I KNOWWW. He sees vampires and werewolves and is all 'okay, I'm chill with this.' But he totally gets how Renesmee needs distance from them, because he sees his daughter and isn't really sure she understands how to treat her daughter. Learning from bad parenting, he thinks, and teaches Renesmee how to bait a hook. And he understands the feeling of being smothered by too much care. (parts I didn't write: the first time Renesmee cut her hair, so short it didn't touch her shoulders, and Charlie told her it looked fantastic, kid. Alice almost cried when she came home.) Also, JACOB IMPRINTING. Totally part of my 'WTF EWWW' reaction. XD

I want to be a good friend and read this, but I just can't. BREAKING DAWN DIDN'T HAPPEN. Sorry, bb. :(

I don't like the whole series (although the New Moon movie will probably be fun because HELLO, WEREWOLVES WOOT! And besides, I like KStew and Pattinson and Lautner), so Breaking Dawn was just '... wow, that was really really bad, not just kind of weird.'

XD It's fine. <333

God this good. I love the contrast between Renesmee and Mary, not just the new person she becomes, but the names. God, the names.

I love how she just drifts away from her family (because honestly, who would really want that "perfect" of a family?).

Great job, bb! ♥


She never really wanted perfection, so she just became herself instead. New name, new life, new people (except for Charlie, because she can't leave Charlie behind no matter where she goes, and she doesn't want to).

Oooh, you said it perfectly! She just drifts away - severes the ties and moves.

Thank you! I'm glad you liked it.

Thank you for writing this. Finally a Renesmee who is not perfect and who rebels and has issues with her family.

Saving this and reading the next fic.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

I guess it's fairly obvious from the stories, but I can't imagine Renesmee anything but at least a little messed up.

Oh my God, that was amazing. I love it!

I like how you made Renesmee or Mary independant, and... I don't know words for it, but I love the new Renesmee.

Do you have more???

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed it!

I would say yes, but I can see that you have already found it! XD

This is amazing! I really like this.

Thank you! I'm glad you enjoyed!

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